Six People to Revise You by J.R. Dawson


It’s a longer story about a dystopia where people can get some kind of whole-being renovation. The last step in the procedure is to get six people to suggest what should be changed about you:

A parent or guardian

Someone who has known you since childhood

A mentor or teacher

An employer or coworker

A spouse, partner, or close intimate friend

Someone who does not consider themself a loved one

I was in tears at the end of this story.

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